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Thread: Yet another attempt at poetry...

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    Inactive Member Tyler Durden's Avatar
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    Dodging Umbrellas

    She fell in soaking blankets, bathing smoothly layered rocks
    And pooled upon the sidewalk, in tiny splashing drops
    She poured on passing walkers, and wet they?re warming coats
    Chimed upon the rooftops in flat and toneless notes

    The people frowned in worry, aiming high up at the clouds
    And she poured down in they?re eyes, wet the sight of staring crowds
    She fell down on my shoulders, relieved the anguish as she came
    And left me cleansed and free, to dodge umbrellas in the rain



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    tyler that's awesome. brought a smile to my day, thank you

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    holy cow... okay, that was really cool. like, not life changing...but so freakin cool. it made me think of someone who just loves life and loves to write and just had a big smile on their face. thanks for sharing tyler!

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    Aw thanks guys, im smiling like an idiot, thanks that really means a lot to me.

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